Hello Anthony, my name is Therese and I am from Pompallier Catholic School in Kaitaia. I really enjoyed your posts about how people are so greedy and I like how you explain it. Next time you could elaborate on your story more but otherwise I enjoyed it! Great Job!
Hi Anthony. I really liked the moral of your fable. Maybe next time you could go in depth a bit more with your story line. Make sure you revise and edit your work too. Great that you also explained that we had been working on our own fables. Nice work.
Hello Anthony, my name is Therese and I am from Pompallier Catholic School in Kaitaia. I really enjoyed your posts about how people are so greedy and I like how you explain it. Next time you could elaborate on your story more but otherwise I enjoyed it! Great Job!
ReplyDeletethank you Therese for your comment I will take that into mind and Inprove my work thank you
ReplyDeleteHi Anthony. I really liked the moral of your fable. Maybe next time you could go in depth a bit more with your story line. Make sure you revise and edit your work too. Great that you also explained that we had been working on our own fables. Nice work.
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