climbing up everest

hi guys this is my story i made it is a not true story plz tell me if you like it EARTHQUAKE!!! We have to get out of here now timmy before the avalanche comes. To late anthony it's coming call in a helicopter to get as high as we can before it reaches thin air and wait for the avalanche to pass over then we will continue in 45 minutes. Let's go. 3 days later we're still climbing up everest timmy has frostbite on his toes halfway up timmy starts slipping and fell into a crevasse the last thing i heard was ahhhhhhhhhhh then silence. So i said to myself i have to keep moving 2 days later i finally make it to the top and place timmy's flag in memorial of timmy and then i place mine to show people that climbing everest is not easy some people have to die and you can experience a lot of bad things but then you've done it and you feel amazing. OK now time to get down